I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Senric, Max from Paroa School here. This is a really scary story. I can't wait to hear it when It's finished. Maybe next time you could add a description so people know what they are going to read.
Hi Senric, I am Harley from paroa school i really like this story just wondering when is it gonna be finshed Could you make one of the house be abondend and people go and explore it and the clown is roaming around somtimes just standing on the thing that would be a good story
Hi Senric, Max from Paroa School here.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really scary story. I can't wait to hear it when It's finished. Maybe next time you could add a description so people know what they are going to read.
Hi Senric, I am Harley from paroa school i really like this story just wondering when is it gonna be finshed Could you make one of the house be abondend and people go and explore it and the clown is roaming around somtimes just standing on the thing that would be a good story
ReplyDeleteHi Senric Im Fraser from Paroa school. Its really good but could you finish it. Thank you if you do it
ReplyDeleteyou need mar wards and less salads from brock
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