I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Senric, thank you for sharing your descriptive writing. I like how you have used adjectives. I wonder how you could add some figurative language? Please remember to proofread before you publish too.
Kia ora Senric, thank you for sharing your descriptive writing. I like how you have used adjectives. I wonder how you could add some figurative language? Please remember to proofread before you publish too.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora senric your story was good but I think you could make it longer but your descriptive writing was good and I liked your story a lot.
ReplyDeleteI Liked The Story Senric.
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